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Writing Tips - How to Write Child Characters
Like most writers, there are many similarities and patterns that emerge across my stories. Some of it is author appeal - going into great details about locales, for instance. I’ve really come to like describing places, and clothing for some reason. Some of it is style. And some of it I’m probably doing unconsciously. It isn’t exactly a bad thing, although I am aware that if I don’t reel some of these things in at a certain point, they can get old and tired. However, one thing that crosses almost all of my works is that most of my characters are children.
I don’t want to toot my own horn or anything, but I think that I write children very well. At the very least, it’s what most people seemed to want me to do a writing tips on. And since this series had been on a hiatus for way too long, I thought that I’d take this one on. Because writing children… is a very easy thing to screw up.
Most writers are adults, and a lot of people have forgotte
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Sinsonte coquetea by OstinLein Sinsonte coquetea :iconostinlein:OstinLein 1,251 128 Alex by Nimphradora Alex :iconnimphradora:Nimphradora 377 7 Commander by Alejandro-Mirabal Commander :iconalejandro-mirabal:Alejandro-Mirabal 546 9 Realistic Pokemon: Scizor by ReneCampbellArt Realistic Pokemon: Scizor :iconrenecampbellart:ReneCampbellArt 613 30 Propa White Markings by tuketi Propa White Markings :icontuketi:tuketi 146 41 Her name was Meri by mcptato Her name was Meri :iconmcptato:mcptato 404 12 Something went wrong by Nord-Sol Something went wrong :iconnord-sol:Nord-Sol 198 11 Heron gryphon by peregyr Heron gryphon :iconperegyr:peregyr 570 70 RWBY Speedpaint : Battle on the sea by dishwasher1910 RWBY Speedpaint : Battle on the sea :icondishwasher1910:dishwasher1910 3,051 100 RWBY : Wrath by dishwasher1910 RWBY : Wrath :icondishwasher1910:dishwasher1910 3,865 464 DingoSpider by KatieHofgard DingoSpider :iconkatiehofgard:KatieHofgard 784 91 Silent Approach by KatieHofgard Silent Approach :iconkatiehofgard:KatieHofgard 1,573 54 Tribes of TeaFeathers Size Chart by KatieHofgard Tribes of TeaFeathers Size Chart :iconkatiehofgard:KatieHofgard 528 21 Outer Cat Clan Overview by KatieHofgard Outer Cat Clan Overview :iconkatiehofgard:KatieHofgard 486 31
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Rape Poem
Right now someone's begging someone to stop.
Someone is crying in a dark bedroom covered in marks.
And someone is taking her seventh shower because she doesn't feel clean enough.
Don't tell me that she was asking for it.
Don't tell me that he was asking for it.
Don't tell me that I was asking for it.
We most definitely didn't.
On the street all I hear is you making my heart beat faster in fear
when you throw after me some shit like this:
''Damn. Look at that ass.''
''Just one kiss.''
''Fucking tease.''
''Lemme put it in.''
''Smile for me.''
''Who's your daddy?''
''You belong on your knees in front of me.''
No. I most definitely fucking don't.
And when I say ''NO'',
I'm a bitch, a cunt, a tease.
Well, I'd rather be a fucking bitch then let your hands or lips come near me.
I still remember the night when I thought that I was done.
I still remember his hands lifting me and pushing me against the wall.
I still remember his aggressive and hungry lips bruising mine and stealing
my breath..no
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What is forgiveness?  Is it a rug to sweep offenses under?  To pretend they never occured or claim that they didn't hurt nearly as bad as it did?  Is forgiveness what you give to a person who continuously abuses you, and then lets the abuse continue?

No.

That is not what forgiveness is.  Not in the slightest.

To NOT forgive is to keep the offense in mind, for whenever you can use it to assault others, a sheathed hatchet ready to be used.  

However, to act as a miser over gold will not help, and will only cultivate a grudge which cloaks the good things in life.  A grudge is a bitter a weight and chain to those whom hoard it, forever weighing them down and sapping their strength.

Forgiveness is not a rug.  It is not watering down the offense,claiming it wasn't so bad.

Forgiveness is to let the offense, the bitterness, the grudge, go and free yourself from their heavy weight.  To forgive is not to forget injustices done, but to move past it and not let it continue pulling you down.  To forgive is to set yourself free.

Things happen, and people will hurt us because the world is a broken place.  

To forgive makes you stronger than the damage inflicted, but it does not mean things return to the way they were.
  
It happened, and you have the emotional wounds to prove it.  Just because you forgive someone does not mean you must let the offender close, as they were before.  

You don't have to let them close again.  You don't have to rekindle your friendship with them.

Forgiveness is freedom.  What happens after is your choice.

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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks for the watch :)
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NeonLanterns Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2015  Student General Artist
Hi there!! I'm being super slow with getting to my messages, so sorry it's
taken me this long to thank you for the follow!
If you have time, and are interested in my comic things, please chec out my other comic White Violet on Tapastic: WV WEB
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NeonLanterns Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2015  Student General Artist
Hi there! I am incredibly bad at catching up to messages, so I'm
sorry it's taken me so long to thank you for the follow!
If you have time, and are interested in more of my comic work, please
check out my webcomic  White Violet at Tapastic: WV WEB
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Cyber-Angel-Rowan Featured By Owner May 5, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, wow. I've been reading your KH fanfics, and now I ship SablexSeifer. XD
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Zephyrus-Genesis Featured By Owner May 5, 2015
*snicker* 
You're bound for disappointment, then.  They'll be good friends at best.  Sable is a touch to busy to worry about anything to do with romance.
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Cyber-Angel-Rowan Featured By Owner May 5, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Dah! *throws hands up*
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RocCenere Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hi! Thanks a bunch for the watch (:
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Zephyrus-Genesis Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015
No prob ^_^
I'm curious to see what happens next in your Nuzlocke.

(I really like the way you do the poke'speak.  English-speaking pokemon are overdone)
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RocCenere Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:> I hope it is interesting in the future then!

Haha, drawing little smiley faces is kind of fun 
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Zephyrus-Genesis Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015
^_^

Not to mention those hieroglyphs!  I've been planning on doing something similar in my own Nuzlocke (when I get around to working on it again) 
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sevenluck Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Thanks for the watch! :aww: 
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Zephyrus-Genesis Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014
Np ^_^
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UmbreonGal Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Thanks for the :+devwatch:
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Zephyrus-Genesis Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2014
No prob ^_^
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ObscurusVII Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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Celem Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks for the watch!
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Zephyrus-Genesis Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014
No problem!  Your photos are beautiful.
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Sergiba Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014
Thanks for the watch! very kind. :hug:
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Zephyrus-Genesis Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014
No problem!  Your pictures are beautiful.
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ObscurusVII Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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Netarliargus Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013
Thanks for keeping an eye :eye: on me! :)
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Zephyrus-Genesis Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013
No prob!
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ObscurusVII Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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ShugoJess0313 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Hello
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